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How To Prepare For Common Application Essay #1

Stephen Friedfeld, Ph.D
11/04/2015

Question #1: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

First and foremost, let's take a deep breath. Understand that the Common Application essays can be a lot to digest for a 17 or 18 year old! To help, let's break down the question one piece at a time.

The question starts by asking students to reflect on their "background, identity, interest, or talent." The key word here is identity, helping to uncover who they are as a person. Your child's background (where they grew up, family circumstances, etc.), interests or talents should be seen as sub-sections that will add to their identity as a whole. When coming up with unique interests and experiences, try to avoid things that are easily ascertained from the rest of the application. Ask family and friends to share their ideas as well. Remember that the biggest questions can be effectively answered using the most precise details.

The question ends by asking you to "share your story." Don't underestimate the importance of maintaining a narrative style to your response - and even the most bizarre experiences can make for a great story. Regardless of the topic, an admissions officer will look for your child to demonstrate critical thinking, intellect, uniqueness and a strong sense of voice.

Here are some thought-provoking examples to help jog your own brainstorm:

Fly-fishing - a student could share an alluring story of strategy and patience from a particular day on the river and tie it back into their identity as a person.

A trip back to the birthplace of your parents - perhaps Mom or Dad were born in a foreign country, one you had been entirely unfamiliar with up until the trip. How might it have changed your identity?

Growing up on a farm - this is an example of a topic in which a student should be as specific as possible. Yes, growing up on a farm is unique, but what precise aspect of farm life is indicative of who you truly are?

Keep in mind that while the Common Application essay prompts have a serious tone to them, it's perfectly ok (and even encouraged) to inject bits of humor or wit into your answer. When you consider the vast amount of responses an admissions officer will read, eliciting even the slightest grin can be a check mark in your favor.

(Stephen has 10+ years of admissions experience at Cornell University and Princeton University. He is a founder of AcceptU, an admissions counseling group comprised entirely of former admissions officers from highly selective colleges and universities. For questions or to learn more about AcceptU, contact Stephen (stephen@acceptu.com, 617-424-0700) or visit www.acceptu.com. )

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